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When I Look at You-Mylli+Robbi by ~blankpages:iconblankpages:





i am utterly complete; i have a future
my heart skips and pauses for thought
what bright fortune draws us together...

i feel loved; a smile creeps accross my face
i see our shared joy,  
i see everything i want

i see my love reciprocated
i see my child, cradled in your arms
i see my happiness

i love you

your eyes are my haven...  
our hearts beat together
you are my saviour, without you i'm nothing

our dreams are our future...  
our hopes are our present...
our love is eternal.
©2005-2010 ~blankpages
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the reason this poem was made because Róbbi and I (Mylli) wanted to write something together and we thought, what better reason for it than the fact we wanted to proclaim our love... i love you Róbb- always will, always have.

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:iconskaera75b:
i love you so much mylli!!! :glomp: :blowkiss:

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dA, YOU ARE NOT GOING TO GET ANY MONEY FROM ME! NO BE GENEROUS, NO SUBSCKRIPTIONS, NO FUCKING FREE TRIALS! LEAVE ME ALONE AND DELETE MY FUCKING ACKOUNT HERE!

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:iconmork-engle:
i love you too Róbbi!!
:blowkiss: :date: :licking: :hug: :love: :kiss: :heart: :smooch: :strip: :cuddle: :glomp: :cling:

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' You won't cry for my absence, I know -
You forgot me long ago.
Am I that unimportant...?
Am I so insignificant...? '

go see ~Evanescence-Fans it rocks
:iconjaclyninsaneandalone:
aww such a cute couple :)!

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Referring preps to Kool-aid lines near you.

There is no such thing as gravity....the world just sucks.
:iconblackrose762:
that is the best portrayal of love thru a poem that i have ever read! so sweet!
who wrote what bits? or did you just do it together generally?
either way it is so cute! and reflects my feelings for rob (my rob, lol) perfectly too.... you got there first though, lol
well done both of you! :clap:

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~arastoph :love: ~blackrose762
:) :heart: :hug: :cuddle: :smooch: :love:
The Reaper is always there, Right on your back, His sharpened sythe ready, Waiting to attack..... :pointandlaugh: :paranoid:
:iconskaera75b:
thanks Jaclyn & Charli, it means a lot :)

it's hard to say who did what... she read ideas out, i rephrased a few ov them, thee first stanza is mostly me, thee seckond is entirely hers, thee thirs is shared... i don't know. we each emptied our hearts and minds into this one. we could have gone on forever.

:)

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dA, YOU ARE NOT GOING TO GET ANY MONEY FROM ME! NO BE GENEROUS, NO SUBSCKRIPTIONS, NO FUCKING FREE TRIALS! LEAVE ME ALONE AND DELETE MY FUCKING ACKOUNT HERE!

my poetry - [link]
:iconmork-engle:
the first was yours, the second was ours, the third was mine, and the rest was shared, doing a line each. honestly, say it right. but teither way, i don't care because it is OUR poem.
thanks Charli and Jaclyn, it does mean a lot :) :hug:
i love you Robb

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' You won't cry for my absence, I know -
You forgot me long ago.
Am I that unimportant...?
Am I so insignificant...? '

go see ~Evanescence-Fans it rocks
:iconxbel:
doubt does not fit that its love is TRUE and nothing or NOBODY will be able to separete yours ... congratualtions!....
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Triste realidad, cruel desencanto grita mi alma bajo el tibio anochecer....!
:iconsimbelmine:
wonderful, the vibes of love are so vivid and strong in this, beautiful, very touching piece.
greatly done.

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Life is for living.
:icongreycarnation:
aww, how cuuute!! :heart:

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